(breaks from the hugs) *sighs* "I'm sorry for lying. I certainly am not! *, Lincoln: It's not fair. Time i sort out these looney superstitions once and for all!! Now we've broken the shower." Honey, we're back. And Lily was doing, whatever 15 month old babies do when nobody's really watching them (another author interruption: I know this sounds vague and it sounds like Lily is going to hurt herself but she's not. "Not until tomorrow," Lincoln replied, confused as to why he was asking this. Okay this episode has already been hated enough you can pretty much type in the rants for 'No such luck' and there will be a lot of those, I too hated this e. Lincoln: "Oh really." Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. When the officer entered the room, he was shocked at what he saw. Trivia. "Aha!," she said, in triumph over what she found, "It appears that you were kicked out and supposed to leave the hotel at 9 am sharp." Any bad luck? She turned to face her parents, a massive glare on her face, and Lola added, "And it's all mom and dad's fault." I get that i was pretty stupid myself to spread that stupid fib, i should have just opened up! She hugged him back.] Lincoln: Lana. MLP - Twilight Sparkle, Applejack and Pinkie. Lynn: FINE! "She's got a million cats that enjoy scratching us like crazy," Lucy said. The worst part is, they had no argument against this. I wont spend the whole afternoon working up an over sweat in that stupid costume that reeks and doesnt fit me! Now our only brother doesn't want us anymore. Lynn ran outside and falcon punched him. I cantake getting kicked out of family activities and being locked out of my room, but being locked out of my own home? Did anything life threatening happen? It centers around an Alternate Timeline involving the events of the infamous episode "No Such Luck", where the Loud family thought that Lincoln was bad luck. "YOU THINK I ENJOY BEING VISITIED BY YOU LITTLE MONSTERS?! "AND WE ESPECIALLY HATE HAVING TO LOOK AT THOSE BUNION INFESTED FEET OF YOURS! Reacting to The Loud House is an ongoing series of The Loud House and The Casagrandes fics written by J Tom (or JTom09) in which many characters from both shows watch episodes of said shows. Sell custom creations to people who love your style. Rita: Honey, please. *Cries* It's going to take me days to fix this baby! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. WE WENT TOO FAR!!! That response caused an immediate reaction of confusion from the kids. Lola: We are your family, we do want you, we promise! Now watch as i do what I should have done in the first place! She was bringing Lincoln her Valentines day card.] Why are you being arrested?! What if one of the neighbours saw Lincoln when he was sleeping outside and called the police? You love baseball. The parents shook their heads up and down rapidly and nervously, the thought of being arrested terrified them and they couldn't stand the thought of being separated from their kids. ", Luna: (opens her arms out) "Come here, bro." Lynn: Let go of me you crazy, raging brute! "So," Lori started with, in an icy tone, "Let's recall what we promised you when you agreed to take us on vacation." Luan then walked up to Leni and whispered into her ear. "Huh. Rita: How about we all sleep in the living room tonight? Lori responded with, yelling the last few words. After that, Rita began crying, a member of her family that she loved despite everyone else hating her had just disowned her and her family. It's not me who's the problem, it's you and your stubborn nature. Lincoln: You are a stupid bully, a coward, a nobody, a freak, a lamebrain, a beast and the worst sister ever AND THAT'S THAT!!!! I even threatened you to go to my game! Luan brought it. Unfortunately, the reason behind the ground shaking presented itself. Luna. NOTE: I am aware this episode has been overly bashed to death. I hate this stupid beach! "Same here." Lynn Loud Sr. and Rita Loud were in the spa, trying to get their minds off the trouble their kids caused yesterday. Am. "We promised you wouldn't notice we were there while had a nice relaxing weekend, right?" ", Pep:[dully] "Oh, I have that effect on people. Whenever the kids fought, they were scared, whenever the kids were angry at each other or one specific sibling, they were scared, but when all the kids were angry at something (in this case, them), they were terrified, because they knew something bad was going to happen. Lynn Sr.: I can't believe we messed up so bad like this! And with that, they headed towards the lobby. Lynn Sr.: But son..if you wanted time off, all you had to do was just say so! You try dancing in this heat! Just tell us and well let you skip it. If he losses, he doesn't blame me or my other friends. This feels like a bad episode from a show thats running out of ideas. And with that, Lori started driving the van out of the hotel and back towards their house. (Tears up) Our only bro. Also, no one in the original knew about the legal consequences of locking out a minor. *Later in the Duke's room, Lincoln approaches Angus* Angus: Ah Lincoln, What's seems to be on your mind? Ronnie Anne: Happy Valentines Day, Lincoln. They sold his furniture and forced him to wear a squirrel costume to bring them good luck.) ", Lisa: "And if it's any consolation, you weren't the only one who should've thought about what you were doing. Lynn: (clenches her fists) Say That Again.. Lincoln: No. ", Lola: (slightly sad) "Well, I probably would've before, but, from now on, you come to my pageants when you want to, and if not, it's fine by me. Especially with the ending, so I created this story to give it a better ending. Fanfiction - No Such Luck Extention. You can never come back. My coffin. ", [The sound of the ball getting hit by the bat is heard and the rest of Lynn's team runs the remaining bases. "No need," another voice was heard saying, everyone turned and saw Jeffrey, the spa manager standing in the doorway, glaring at all of them, "I got staff to pack all of your stuff into your bags and bring it downstairs when I was informed you were still here by Maddie, one of my front desk clerks." ", [It's revealed to be Lincoln in the runabout costume], Lincoln:[to the viewers] "My plan is simple: I watch the game in disguise, and when the Squirrels win, everyone will see I'm not bad luck. luckily, it was unlocked, he opened it and went inside.) We're supposed to be here until tomorrow. Guess they forgot to lock the windows. ", Lincoln: "Well what are we standing here for? The family think Lincoln is bad luck so they ban him from attending their activities.. Synopsis. As Maddie looked at the devastation, she thought back to the parents. I hate fashion shows! (Cries) All my precious tiaras. You're supposed to be grounded to the hotel room, remember?" ", Lincoln: "Well Luna, we all make mistakes. ", Lola: (with a sad look on her face) "No. Well thanks [Sam then kissed Luna on the cheek. IM hoping to show this to Nickelodeon themselves someday. I promise I won't be absent all the time, just once in a while. "But you know what's not fair?" We just thought you were bad luck, we didnt mean to upset you like this. Rita asked. This whole trip their parents were telling them to behave and they got grounded when they didn't, but now they're learning that they did something to cause them to be kicked out of the hotel after only one day. It was wrong of me to blame you for my failure and call you bad luck! Ive come to many grave-digging events and cemeteries with you! My family learned not to let something as stupid as superstitions get to them and tear us apart, and I learned to just be honest about things like this instead of convincing them about something ridiculous just take a break from going to certain events. (Bursts into tears). Years after his death, Lincoln is given the opportunity to see how his sisters are doing. Lana: What did you expect us to do Lincoln? We don't want to stare at you on the drive home, so you're sitting in the back." [shows the score: Hazeltuck Lions: 3, Royal Woods Squirrels: nothing.] Lincoln: Well my family doesnt think im bad luck anymore, in fact now they think im good luck. Understood?!" . ], [They pant heavily, before realizing it was all a nightmare. "WE HATE YOUR DISGUSTING PUDDING!" I don't need you chumps at my stupid games! I'm calling the cops! The siblings looked down after she said this, making the parents feel even more lousy than they already did. Hearing their son shout at them like this, both mad and sad at them, broke their hearts. I cant believe you all locked me outside and sold all my things! Lucy said, as the siblings once again glared at their parents with anger. No one said anything, not the siblings, not the obnoxious guys, not Felix, not the woman on the other end, just silence. "Lori!," Lynn Sr. yelled, "You should better then to stop suddenly in traffic!" Lola yelled. Lynn: Put that suit back on Lincoln! (looks at Lincoln with a smile and puts a hand on his shoulder) "All of us. I'll never be able to play games the best way again! I have just had it! I hate that you never listen to reason! Theres no need to shout. ), Lincoln: (to the viewers) " I can't believe they actually locked me out the house, which is also my home. Leni: Linky, if you didnt want to come to my fashion show, you just had to say so! "Yes, you are right," the woman said, "It appears that your parents were caught swimming in the pool after hours." *Sniff* No more clothes making for at least a week. ", Lynn: (smiles, more tears come down her eyes,) "What did I do to deserve a brother like you?" The Princess and the Everlasting Emerald: A Royal Woods Fairytale. Putting the phone on speaker, they waited for her to pick up the phone. They felt nothing but guilt and shamein their hearts, even the goth child who claims to not have one. I hate that you do nothing but ruin other people's lives, including one of your own! I will not be discarded and than used!! Baby Steps / Brawl in the Family. Lori: (sighs) Maybe we did go a little too far with these crazy superstitions. They were my favourite! I spread one little white lie just to get more free time because i cant afford to come to so many actvities all in one go! You locked me out of my room, sold all my furniture and made me into a thing!! And after that, the whole room was silent. She smiled as Lincoln took it. Post a journal. (They enter the house, but Lincoln is nowhere to be seen.). This is also a parody fanfiction that is based on Spongebob Squarepants' episode 'Hall Monitor,' The Adventures of Jimmy Neutron's episode 'Hall Monster,' Wayside's episode 'Safety Monitor,' it is also based on a chapter from Loud House Tales that was called 'Hall Monitor,' however that is no longer up for some reason, and Lynn Loud Jr. being a hall monitor in the Loud House season 5 episode 'Schooled!' Lucy: Lincoln, stop! We should thought about it ourselves before jumping to a preposterous conclusion that you were bad luck. But I'm not entirelyinnocent myself." But dont worry, youre still a great writer. ", Lynn: "We forgot to lock the windows! (Lynn looks confused.) Luna, Luan, Lola and Lisa were battling off against three obnoxious hotel guests that made all of them look like saints. The siblings glared at her for a moment but saw she had a point, it didn't make sense to ground her or Lily for that matter, she was a baby, anything she did wasn't entirely her fault. Bad luck never happened before when he was there..but he said all we do is just mess things up..we really are the worst family ever Rita: We're sorry kids. I know you would never label me bad luck, and youd never neglect me. Then, he opened it up. Lori turned to face him, lowered the window and said, "What?" Project Loud House; Ties That Bind; It's a Loud, Loud, Loud, Loud, House; Toads and Tiaras; . But Lynn Jr. yelled, "SIT DOWN!" "Get in here, now!," the man yelled, scaring the girl and making her run into the room like her butt was on fire. Luna blushed. "I'm not sure," Felix responded with, "I've got two groups of people saying they have one of our hotel rooms at the same time. My last one just got messed up and i wish to make one properly. Everyone winced at the final words out of Lola's mouth, but not the woman on the other end. Well just grin and bear it. My first story is done. ", Lincoln: "Just hear me out." Lola: WE'RE HORRIBLE BRATS!!! Ruth shouted back, insulted. We got your back. Lynn Sr. and Rita wanted to say something, but saw the glares on their kids' faces and knew that they wouldn't get anywhere arguing. Lynn Loud steps up to the plate, but with the luck she's been having today, the Squirrels are looking a whole lot like roadkill. Lincoln: Happy Valentines Day, Ronnie Anne. I wonder if the windows are locked?" Felix turned to the clock on the wall, it was almost 1 in the afternoon, why were these kids still in a room they were supposed to have been long gone from. Rita: WE ARE THE MOST DISGRACEFUL PEOPLE EVER!!! I hate the fact that I was ever related to you monsters! The moment she said that, Lynn Sr. and Rita's faces became shocked with horror, their kids knew about what they did and that they got kicked out because of it. "Well mom, you know what I think?" Clenching his fist, he raises it up and smashes it hard on the ground. I hate that you all are as dumb as a big fat rock! (Inhales, then exhales) "I. Lincoln: Well, this was cool. As they were trying to relax, stomping and shaking were heard, causing everyone in the spa to wonder what was going on. Luna: I dont know. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. (heads to Vanzilla and gets inside, they drive of to the movies). Lynn Sr. asked. None of the kids wanted to talk to their parents and the parents didn't know what to say to their kids. Find out what other deviants think - about anything at all. Who do you think you are, calling us names and insulting us like that!? "Hi, Aunt Ruth," Lola said, in a fake sweet tone, "it's your niece Rita's kids." ", Pep:[downright bored] "I think I've wasted my life. SEE YOU NEVER!" Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. "Why?" Lincoln is running through town, sweating, panting, tearful and very thirsty. Ive often helped feed your pets and come to your stunt moves. SO I DEMAND AN EXPLANATION!" The family and Bobby are there to support Lynn. Instead he found comfort in being hugged by Leni, glaring at her parents as she did so. Now, while this episode is nowhere near as bad as "Brawl in the Family" and "No Such Luck," the episode is still pretty thumbs down, especially with the ending. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Ronnie Anne sees Lincoln kicked out of his home and decides to take him out of there. Some sisters those ghouls are. Upload your creations for people to see, favourite, and share. MY TROPHIES!!! On the other end, Maddie, an African-American woman in her mid-20's with short curly hair, heard what Felix said and got worried. What kind of parents would do that? He leaps onto Lynn in a fight cloud, the two yell and shout over hits, kicks, punches, bites and headbutts. Lincoln was put into a coma during the nsl incident where he meets kamen rider diend and is given his powers afterwards he takes Lily and runs away to canterlot where he. I hate pageants! "Good," Jeffrey said, stepping aside and point to the doorway, "Now get out! (Raises his fist at her). Cuts back to now. Immediately, everyone started running or hiding to avoid getting caught in the crosshairs of their destruction. News flash; I live here!". OUR PRECIOUS TROPHIES! Lincoln: Youre too stubborn to admit youre wrong, you never admit you mess up, your as gross as you are lousy and you never learn anything! [Lynn Sr. teared up and he burst into tears at the heartwarming moment.] Head Poet's Anxiety alt scene12. I've had an account on this website for about a year and a half now and this is the first story I'm doing for it. We were given the room." Of course, it's not like the parents could them there anyway. Fool Me Twice extended ending10. Lola: If it wasn't for Miss. "You guys are literally going up the room right now and getting our stuff now!" (Lincoln says nothing to his mother. ], Baseball Announcer:[clinging to Pep]"SQUIRRELS WIN! You kicked me out of your lives, now I'm kicking you all out of mine!! They are looking very heartbroken.). ", Lynn Sr.: (with a broken voice) "And we were horrible parents to you, locking you out! Yes." ", Sisters (sans Lynn, with sad looks on their faces): "No. [Later, Lincoln and his family were sitting in the living room when the doorbell rang. Lola: Hey, Lincoln! Rita stood up and heads to the door. As they leave, Jeffrey grabs Lynn Sr.'s arm, making him and his wife turn to him, he added, "And just so you know, your kids tore apart my lobby and the room you were staying in. Submit your writing. And then, as quickly as it appeared, the noises disappeared. "WE HATE THOSE STUPID CATS OF YOURS!" ", Lucy: "We don't care, we'll watch anything you want. "It looks like the room is being occupied by a Mr. Todd Fowler, Kyle Dawson and Miguel Diaz as of this morning." "Hotel security came up to the room?!" They suddenly feel saddened, guilty, broken and worried. (Points at Lynn) Nothing, but a stupid sore loser and a nasty, brainless brute! [Ronnie Anne handed Lincoln the card. The heat increases. You're not even a real family anymore and I HATE that! I'm not. We know you are!". I hate that you don't care about anyone, but yourselves! after they let go, Lincoln notices Lynn standing with her head down.) Speaking of, I plan to do another alternate ending to another Loud House episode, the ending for it might have been wholesome and good, I just feel that the events that happen in the episode could've been prevented if the siblings did this, that's all I'm going to say. #The loud house #lincoln loud #lori loud #leni loud #luna loud #Luan Loud #Lynn Loud #Lucy Loud #lana loud #lola loud #lisa loud #lily loud #the loud house headcanons #the loud . (she comes down into the living room and whistles loudly) FAMILY, DOWN HERE NOW!!! Lucy and I were trying to hunt a ghost." Then you'll be treated like irresponsible teenagers." YOU'RE THE WORST FAMILY TO EVER LIVE!!!! (pauses for a few seconds) "Do you guys notlove me anymore? You're like some mindless mob and I hate that! I feel like a fool! "Okay," the woman says, "Surprisingly enough, it wasn't something those kids did." Lynn: (coughs) You know, if I knew that my superstitions would make Lincoln disown us I never would have started this nonsense in the first place. Kick the . ", Lynn: "After how badly I treated you? ", Lori: (smiles forgivingly) "It's alright, Lincoln. ", Baseball Announcer: "Just look at our poor squirrels! "Wait, what are you saying?" Making Lincoln think we don't care about him? "Lincoln," Rita said, about to get up from the couch to comfort him. @JackLeighton19 Idea on How to End This Story: Employee: (Grunts) That's it! ", Lucy: "After all, it's not like we always go to each others events 100% of the time, so why should you? (charges towards Lynn in a rage) AND I HATE YOU!!!! "We just wanna tell you how much we HATE YOU, YOU GROSS UGLY THING!" YOU'LL BE HAPPY TO KNOW YOU WON'T HAVE TO WORRY ABOUT DEALING WITH ME OR MY CATS OR MY DISGUSTING PUDDING OR MY BUNIONS ANYMORE! Once again, this shocked Rita, she thought she knew her aunt, but clearly she was wrong. Lincoln: I dont think I told you I was bad luck. Lincoln: Which is why Im making you all wear squirrel suits for the rest of your lives, [They all gulp. The Loud House: No Such Luck (2 Alternate Endings) View source Ah yes, No Such Luck. I can't let those crazy beasts see me! I'm giving it a Teen rating, because while there is no serious violence in this story, there are still some moments that might not be comfortable for youngsters to have to read (primarily shouting and lots of it). Ruth responded back, clearly mad too. Rita asked. During the drive, there was nothing but silence, which is very uncommon for a vehicle that is usually occupied by 13 people. Fortunately, there was no earthquake. Mentioning their Aunt Ruth's bunions caused the siblings to gag, before returning back to normal and glaring at their parents. I didn't think you guys would believe I was bad luck, even going as far as to lock me out. "Mr. Security Officer, if I may," his attention went down to that of a four-year old girl with shaggy brown hair, glasses and a green sweatshirt, she pointed to the three other men in the room, and said, "I'd like to point out that these three imbeciles welcomed themselves into our room for no good reason. (Tugs at it), (They tug and pull while the rest of the family backs away nervously). Lincoln: (off-screen) Where are you going Luce? Knowing they sealed the deal and there's no way they will ever have to go back to Aunt Ruth's, Lincoln said, "Well so long, freakshow. "Nah, Aunt Ruth," Luna said, "you're gonna wanna listen to this." Lynn Sr: We promise to never do it again! Completed She also knew it wasn't about Jeffrey, the manager, because any reviews he gave to staff were done over a month ago. Since the room is occupied, it should've shown up as that in the computer database. I HATE THIS!!! Lucy: So, that's it then? He helped hold us all together and outings just won't be the same without Lincoln. except in this story, the family never believed that he was bad luck in the first place. He had a glare on his face and he was tapping his foot on the ground repetitively, showing that he was serious. Experimental One Shot. No Such Luck - Lucky Carol by TriassicLane Cartoons Comics Funny Comics Loud House Rule 34 The Loud House Lincoln The Loud House Fanart Loud House Characters Funny Comic Strips Movies Coming Out Sonic And Amy More information . That question caused all the sisters to become shocked and then become angry. The End. If you didn't show up, I don't want to think about what would've happened." They knew that whatever they were going to tell Aunt Ruth, it wasn't going to be good. It was against the law. We wont! Lori: "The bigger question is, how did you get inside? Post-Story Notice: Anyway. ", Lincoln: (to Leni) "Leni, all those times I went to the Mall with you to pick out clothes, anything bad happen those times? I'll admit, it was stupid and wrong of me to lie to them and take advantage of it, and I probably should've just told them that I just wanted some me time, but honestly, I think this is way more than I deserve. Maddie herself hid underneath the desk and she could hear the sounds of things being tossed and breaking or getting smashed on and breaking. Luna turned to him with a glare on her face and said, "Forget it, dad! We get it. Share your thoughts, experiences, and stories behind the art. Lincoln: And, you locked me out of my room. We let superstitions get to us, and we did something no family should ever do. So, I plan to rectify that. I hate softball! Except now I have to deal with the most annoying teasing that's ever existed. See if I care! (Shouts) Put the head back on before we get stung by a jellyfish! YOU ROCKED IT, LYNN-SANITY! What's going on here?! Although it does teach us a good moral about it not being an easy road (but its worth it), some of the stuff involved does feel a bit out of place (like the disowning part by Ruth). (Lincoln is sitting on the back porch while his family is at the game, looking pretty mad. Dont threaten your little sister! Ever again. Actually, there's something I need to do! Rushing to the balcony door, he opened it, getting the girl's attention. If you dont want to wear the squirrel costume, dont wear it. ", Luna: (with a sad look on her face) "No. So consider this as a fourth fanfic of mine. ", Luan: "The same goes for all of us. I have truly failed the term 'scientist'. N Eddy's big picture show . It spawned dozens of fanfics about it, and caused his whiny fanbase to go haywire on the sisters. (The family gets more and more heartbroken as he continues to rant.). She hoped the kids would say something, but all they got were grunts of disbelief. "Wait," Lori interrupted with, "How could our parents get us kicked out just for taking a late night dip?" Youve ruined my life and made me look like a melting snow cone!! Lincoln, you are now free to come back into the house.". Lincoln finally got through to them, but he didn't feel happy about seeing them cry, he knew he was still partly to blame), Leni: (with a broken voice) "What have we done?! But that's only because we don't have a room anymore." THAT THING IS AS HIDEOUS AS YOU!" ", Lincoln: "But just because you lost your game, doesn't mean you have to pin it on me! I know remaking this episode has been done to death, so this is probably the only alternate ending I'm going to do for this episode. Ugh!" Lily was seated in the back with them, she looked up at them with glares and once again said, "Poo poo!" i certainly didn't expect something like that, but i guess curiosity must be fed. "Listen to what?" Ive been a really nice guy with you for far too long! Pulling out his walkie talkie, he said, "This is Hotel Officer Mooresfield. He crawls over to the kitchen sink and drinks deeply.). "YOU HEARD HER!" Things were destroyed or damaged and they saw some people getting tended to for bruises. (sniffles) I'd better make a home fast. Lisa: *Gasp* It's official! [Later, Lincolns room is unlocked and his furnature was back. That answer definitely caused this man's brain to get straight to work. I-, Lincoln: "LYNN!" Leni: WE DON'T DESERVE LOVE OR THIS TRIP TO THE BEACH!!!! Upload stories, poems, character descriptions & more. Lincoln Loud, the middle child of the family, was brought to his older sister's baseball league from his own will. loud. The way the security officer said, 'Right now,' made Luna nervous, it was typically the tone of voice used when someone was in very serious trouble. As the last of the guests ran away, Leni, the blonde girl that one of the guys mentioned earlier, came around the corner and saw her family in the spa. We would never force you to go if you don't want to. Status Update. Lori: No, this is literally a terrible beach trip and I want to go home! Its a stupid mascot costume! Hearing the guy mention 'the blonde girl in a green dress,' made them get even more nervous as they knew the girl he was referring to was their sister, Leni. Lincoln: I'd like to keep this in private, but i got a question for you angus. However, that silence would not last long as the security man and the guests saw the kids' faces turned red with anger, steam started bellowing out of their ears and a devastating fire formed in their eyes, the four started trying to get out of the room quickly, as they knew something bad was going to happen. I just hurt Lynn! LYNN LOUD HITS A GRAND SLAM!!! Rita tried to say something, but she couldn't. I MESSED UP!!! SQUIRRELS WIN!" I hate that you made me feel like an outcast! She's smarter than she looks and there's evidence canon in the show to prove it.). ], Lincoln: Mom, Dad? "Aunt Ruth, please reconsider," Rita started with, before she interrupted by Ruth. Felix asked, "Can you tell me what exactly caused these kids to be kicked out?" ", [The family and Bobby cheer for Lynn as she makes her run around the field.
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